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Guys!

Thu, 05 Apr 2012 22:58:37 -0400

Send some stuff my way! Review requests, questions? Anything? Come on!

And now I wait...

Wed, 04 Apr 2012 22:42:40 -0400

Oh god, I’m so anxious to hear back from these two RP’s. I just want to know if I got in or not!

mindmedicine: Drunk - Ed Sheeran

Wed, 04 Apr 2012 17:51:49 -0400

mindmedicine:

Drunk - Ed Sheeran

Hi, we haven't opened but could you please give feedback on the plot and theme. please and thank you

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 23:06:00 -0400

Of course sweetie!

Theme: The theme is nice, not my favorite, but it is easy to navigate which is always a top priority. You never want to use a theme people get lost in. As for the colors, I would change them, give them a deeper, richer colors. Like deep maroons, kind of misty greens.. Something to match your graphics -which, by the way, I love! It’s simple and intriguing and yeah. I don’t have really anything bad to say about it, just change the color scheme..

Plot: I like it -reminds me of The Hunger Games, which I am a huge fan of- but the fact that people will have to die kind of puts me off. I mean, no one wants to see their character die before they even really got the chance to play, what’s the fun in that? And the whole purpose of roleplay is to have fun! I do think that you should maybe add some more to it.. Maybe some back history? How did all of this start? When did it start? Are there loopholes in the game that, if a contender finds it, will be set free to live their life? Like I said, go deeper into the story.

Overall, I’d give it.. 2 and a half out of five Grace faces. Change the coloring and add some back history and I think it’ll improve greatly.

I'm being a very bad RPC,

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 20:53:58 -0400

I’m sorry.. Just smack me back into place. Send me some questions, reviews, or really.. anything!

ahllsdglhn I’m trying to come up with an OC biography and I’ve got a general idea of...

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 18:53:56 -0400

ahllsdglhn I’m trying to come up with an OC biography and I’ve got a general idea of what I want it to be, but I can’t decide on the age of her during ‘the main event’. I keep going back and forth between 8 and 16.. I’m liking 8, but then I think “Maybe that’s to young” and ugh.. I can’t decide!

gracehelbig: Back in Brooklyn.

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 18:50:56 -0400

gracehelbig:

Back in Brooklyn.

@Helbig-critic

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 18:40:15 -0400

dobrev-critic:

I got your message, I’m just not replying so that I know what you’d like

Haha, okay.. Thanks so much!

DailyGrace: What? Let’s assess this entire … thing. You think a...

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 16:00:23 -0400

DailyGrace:

What? Let’s assess this entire … thing. You think a human that hardly showers on a daily basis, that dances with a mop in her kitchen and a vacuum in her living room, and dances with frozen clams on her bed, got a boob job?

I should really probably do something

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 15:07:05 -0400

but I’m not exactly sure what I should do. I’m kinda like.. brain dead today.

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 01:40:38 -0400

mcadams-critic: You’re welcome! Tumblr kinda hates me right now and always so yeah.. Again, thank...

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 00:27:39 -0400

mcadams-critic:

You’re welcome!

Tumblr kinda hates me right now ~~and always~~ so yeah.. Again, thank you!

mcadams-critic replied to your post put between the sections you want to divide Thank you. Thank...

Tue, 03 Apr 2012 00:24:21 -0400

mcadams-critic replied to your post

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Thank you. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Mwah!

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 23:05:25 -0400

Stonewell-High-RP review First impressions: I was very intrigued, as most high school RPG’s...

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 22:45:00 -0400

Stonewell-High-RP review

First impressions: I was very intrigued, as most high school RPG’s I see are very.. perky.. I guess you could say. Which isn’t necessarily a bad thing but it’s nice to see something different. I really like the graphics, they give you kind of a feel for the air/intensity of the group. It seems very kind of.. mysterious and I like that.

Theme: I really likee this theme, it’s not seen too often in RPG’s (that I have seen) but it’s not unused either. I love the simplicity of it and the page is easy to navigate, which is always good. The coloring is nice and (obviously) matches the text on the graphic so it really connects it well.

Plot:

I really love this plot, it’s original but classic. It kinda reminds me of a spin on Doctor Who (which may or may not have been what you are aiming for, but I personally love it.) I think you really went into the background story nicely and gave all the necessary information to be able to really know what’s going on. Also the fact that it is more then one of two paragraphs is really fantastic. I have seen a lot of roleplay where the background stories are only one or two paragraphs. And although, quantity doesn’t equally quality it’s still nice to see something that is more than a few sentences.

Characters: I think that the bios are nicely written, but I think including some back story would be nice. It would also help people really get to know them and therefore be able to portray them better. I am very happy that you have incorporated characters that are over the age of 17, since it’s pretty rare. I really like the fc’s you’ve chosen, not too popular, not too rare. It’s nice since I typically only see fc’s such as Selena Gomez and Justin Bieber, which isn’t bad if the have the right story but even then I think they are way over used. As for the graphics you have used, they’re not my favorite. I would maybe change the color and the font, but the background is nice and matches the main graphic. The gifs are.. not my favorite. They all look like they came from different places - which they probably did and that’s fine, but some are higher quality and some aren’t so much. I don’t know, maybe that’s just my O.C.D side but maybe try something like this? It’s simple and looks very nice with pretty much any type of roleplay. It’s also very clean and professional looking.

Comments/ Concerns:

They’re not really any that I have!

Overall:

I really like it and everything looks great and well put together! Keep it up!

Hello! Would you mind reviewing our roleplay? We'd love you forever :)

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 21:19:16 -0400

Of course! Just give me a minute, baby doll..

sweethearteverlark: She’s funny, she’s sarcastic and she loves...

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 20:02:39 -0400

sweethearteverlark:

She’s funny, she’s sarcastic and she loves The Hunger Games…what is there not to love about her?! [x]

So..

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 19:28:08 -0400

I think for the most part I have everything sorted out and if I think of anything I can go back and at it.. So, anyway. Send me some questions, reviews, anything!

~~Also, if you think of some things that could be added to this blog that would be great as well! I’m open to any tips since I’m new to this.~~

WHERE WOULD YOU MOST LIKE TO VISIT ON YOUR PLANET?

Mon, 02 Apr 2012 17:48:00 -0400

New York,

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